AMW Thread - szelin

[szelin]

Hi guys, thanks for looking at this thread, and for all your helpful comments! ^^

This marks the end of Rainyskies Chapter 1, written by moontique n drawn by me, posted here as a teaser.
Page 12 and onwards will not be posted.

Thanks again to everyone who has taken the time to look at this thread. ^^

Cheers,
szelin

[KU-j0-]

hello hello~! just dropped by to kaypoh hehe. well here's just some stuff i noted after looking through all these great drawings
- lin is very hardworking! there's alot of research done, character creation explored etc.*thumbs up*
- the character design is great. i can quite spot their basic characteristics (hot headed, sheepish, shy etc) just from the design and pose. good job conveying that~
- the comic panels move very nicely too. the suspense is there, and mystery, and without words i can still understand what's going on.
- and i totally love the Rain and Lucian pairing!! I think they look so sweet together Rain is such a sweet but spunky girl, from what I've seen so far ^o^

well here's some stuff that i hope might help
- when showing suspense or something dramatic that's going on, it helps to use slanted panels, which adds to the intensity. it sort of acts like action/speed lines on its own.
- panels act like 'timers'; big panels show a longer amount of 'camera' time spent on a scene which is usually either important, or a transition scene, or one that sets the stage. Less important scenes can be done with small panels.
- and lastly, maybe you can try using a wider division in between panels (upper and lower) as this would help audience's eyemovement easier (so they know it's left to right, before top to bottom).

wow i think i typed alot hehe. but anyway kudos to you and moontique's kickass project ^___^

[moontique]

yesh, szelin is like sooooooooooooooooooo hardworking. kekeke

And I totally lurve the Rain/Lucian pairing too!!! XDDDD

*high-fives ku-jo*

[szelin]

Ah, KU-j0- , thanks so much for visiting! And the comments! And the tips!

But no, I'm not that hardworking; in fact have been a little slack on this story recently. XP
Will work harder! *kicks self in ass* XDD
Thanks again. ^^

[szelin]