szelin

was hoping to keep it to 1 thread, but...
ah well, cos like really no one see the other thread liao.

Backstory/Pages 1-23, here.

Page 24. Reminder: read Right to Left
Comments and critiques welcome. This is 2nd draft; looking to improve for 3rd(and hopefully final) draft. But intending to finish 2nd draft(ink, tone etc) all the way first, for practice. ^^

Hope you like the story (and pics.. XP ) so far. ^^

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ahsie

hello szelin~!

Nice going~ and nice plan from the brother, bringing the tent over there~
For a moment I thought the moonlight would just hit him and something else would happen XD

Oh, btw... Why'd you shift to another thread?

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szelin

Hi ahsie, thanks for the reply!

Well, I've been updating the other thread but never see any feedback so I thot it was because it sunk too far back already. So I started another thread lor, but effect seems to be about the same. XP

Well, in the end, Zich suggested that it might be cos 1 page at a time is really hard to read, which i also kinda understand n agree, so I'll b finishing more pages first before posting. XD

i'm also considering closing this n moving everything back to 1 thread again; what do you think? It seems more convenient that way. >.>

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winter_hyde

hey..i know the main character..ha

szelin

Acck, you actually went and dug up my old thread! Thanks very much for looking. XD
Ya, it's him lor. I never post that pic here cos it'll really be a spoiler. XP